Some Examples of Pages from my Brochure

I am also designing a brochure to coincide with the poster I designed. The brochure's intention is to educate Bayside Village residents of why smoke alarms are so crucial and how to properly maintain them. Here are some pages I have been working on that are also a work in progress but should be finalized by this weekend.

Here we go again

Revised Poster

Revised Poster

Feedback?

Poster Concept 1

This is definitely a WORK IN PROGRESS....and I am going to put a little more text that is very brief about the maintenance of smoke alarms, but feedback would be great.
Do you think the smaller subscript should be more like "test your smoke alarms monthly and replace the batteries annually" or a statistic that says " 40% of home fire deaths occur in homes where no smoke alarms are present, test yours today to ensure your family the best chance of survival" ?????

Final Problem and Purpose Statement

After conducting the greater portion of my research and hearing the investigative results of my brother's case, I decided to switch gears and change the subject matter of my project towards smoke alarms and the importance of their maintenance. Here is my Revised Problem and Purpose Statement.

Problem Statement: Residents of Bayside Village, a large housing complex in SF, neesd to recognize the necessity of properly working smoke alarms and the importance of maintaining them.

Purpose Statement: The purpose of this study was to determine an effective way to educate residents of Bayside Village of the importance of proper maintenance of smoke alarms.

Panel of Experts

I have finally been able to reach a consensus from my Panel of Experts to generate my finalized list.
1. Fire Marshall of San Francisco, Barbara Schultheis
2. Deputy Director for Permit Services of the Department of Building Inspection for San Francisco, Laurence Kornfield
3. San Francisco State University Professor from the Design and Industry Department specializing in Information Design, Pino Trogu
4. San Francisco State University Professor from the Design and Industry Department specializing in Product Design, Hsiao-Yun Chu